Originally Posted by MARVOLoUsJ1009

call jay out? dunn u betta grab ya gun and ryde with vestes-
or ima "aim" at ya moms "pussy" at 1 "pm" & call it a "private-message" -

meh. kinda weak opener, self glorification

shadow da tool-pop-often....so close ya mouth dude-stop-talkin-
be4 ya shirt look like u bought it from a "tupac auction"-[alot of holes]

nice multi, ok punch

ya name neva come up when they disscusin da greats,when im clutchin da 8-
ima take ya "timber(lands)" and leave u "wet" like u was "just-in" a "lake"-
(get it..justin timberlake)

meh. wouldnt use something like that in a battle again

u know i inspire ya sons,shadow i could tell by ya wordplay u tired & dumb-
ima wire ya gums,and ya chest aint gon "work" rite after i "fire" ya lungs-
u neva gon make it in rap u gon stay in da "streets" like "tire's & bums"-

nice.

marv's a vet,my record fukked up cuzz my sick punches is hard da catch-
shadow u garbage if i was da "Feed" off ya verse i would "starv" da death-

first really nice punch (second line) though slightly played

ima win dis battle shadow's conry plus my shits tighter-
he couldn't get a "thumb's up" on his rappin battlin a bunch of "hitch hiker's"-

pretty good

fagget im "nicer" than ya girl when she want me da bone her-
matter fact im "nicer" than ya "grandmother" when company's over-

no

i already merked u dogg but i could see u wanna commin at me still??-
scrappy-chill,cuzz im "nicer" than u r 2 ya moms when u want a happy meal-

drop the "nicer" bit

play tuff till i spray stuff and put da 40 in ya memory-
its 2 clipps 20 shots in each ima put 40 in ya memory-
a week later ya boy's a be lightin candles spillin a 40 in ya memory-

^^ didnt like this

7/10 lack of personals, ur shit had some complicated shit, but it ruined it, when i have to read quotes to know wut u mean, it isnt worth it