Originally Posted by Shadows edge

Sorry man.. had to help my friend study.. aight here goes...

Yo check it...

This cat from Queens, but that don’t make you royal…
You challenge me, so I guess you just enjoy “L”…

"L"? i dont know wut that means

You get less action than someone with gender: undetermined will
You call yourself the sickest… more like terminally ill

ok punch

Cuz your death’s predestined, leave ya hung by the intestines
Play like you from the ghetto, I bet your name is Preston…

whack

Worst pain you ever felt was a razor knick…
And your dick get less action than a lifetime original flick.
Only once got head – someone needed to use a toothpick
Just admit it…
All of Saddam’s oil couldn’t make your rhymes slick

other than the toothpic part, pretty nice

How you gonna come at this? Talk shit, but you lack the status
Couldn’t stay with me if you had a breathing apparatus

second line, use better meta

Check the sig.. you don’t pay attention to all us bitches?
Fuck ditches, pick up them britches before I live ya ass in stitches

^ whack

Funny, ignoring the rest is the only way you come out best
Your crew bout to be blessed as I leave it Marv-less…

good closer


had some real whack lines in their, some good ones also, but u lacked consistency

6/10