Thread: freestyle any 1 looking to collab
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Old 04-26-04, 08:41 AM   #4
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i agree wit the structure, and i also think u need to elevate ure thoughts, very played out lines but its exspected from a fresh head....
not a bad read but not that great....

elevate.......
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