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Old 04-26-04, 12:48 PM   #20
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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well toxic u was too weak ur Structure was VERY BAD u NEEd more punchs Worst Line: stand at attention when i get to the mic so u betta listen// u fucked up cunt ofa dike
best line:cant defeat me
cuz u cant beat what u cant see
if i ever seen a wackass ho like u then id have u runnin from me


CHarge Came at u harder Structure nice more punches and remember all about da Punches

Toxic u need to work on ur STRUCTURE like CRAZY ur structure is like 3/10 so work on dat u need more multis to 3/10 u dint do alot punches to weak dint even connect ur flow u didint have 1 2/10 its allright you'll be better

Charge u had good multi punches 9/10 so that was GREAT! for the Structure 8/10 thats good Flow like 8/10 charge u got off on him BEST LINES: youve lost two in a row and its gonna be ya next defeat//
your not a real mc your a fuckin fake//
tryin to battle me was your fatal mistake//
its people like u i hate,you call ya self toxic but cant intoxicate//
you lie so im irrate,you steal ya shit you cant fabricate//
its you that ill annihalate,i won this in tha starting gate//
that shit WAS NICE!

So Overall Charge gets the win for more Punches and better Flow STucture overal like i said well u get my vote

Vote: CHARGE
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