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Old 04-26-04, 01:07 PM   #16
youngyo
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decent battle...thugzy ya punches were weak, your vocab was basic, you had no multies or personals, opener weak, closer weak, stucture was off, didn't flow to well neither, you really gotta elevate son, respect
Cream....good verse, good punches, didn't really have any personals, flowed well, had a few multies, vocab was good, opener coulda been better, closer was tight(nice wordplay), good wordplay in verse, nice drop
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