I'm So Punny
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IP:
good battle...pretty one sided though this was my break down....
the crazy one...( these are grades for pairs of lines...)
1.5 come on
2.5 what is this?
3.5 wheres the personal??? no punch!
4.5 how does talking about college raves...win a battle?
5.5.5 finally something that rhymed...but where is the personal or punch
6.8 finally something...that was pretty good...bad structure though
7.6 kind of a punch
8.6.5 fine...whateva though
now 2 bad
1.7.5 pretty tight...nice multi...good shit...weak punch though
2.8 haha that was pretty good...i like your structure...
3.9 oh shit...clever...pope...funny shit...good line
4.9 damn....blue lagoon...original i like it
5.5 what...ya lost me...not good...disgarded...nope not good...so played
6.5 you can't comeback to what he says....read the rules
7.9 nice closer...you can't elevate...against guys like this...but he'll get better...
v-2bad
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