i changed my title !!
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breakdown for the_crazy_one:
flow:it flowed alright i guess kinda on a basic tip though 6/10
volcab:average if not below average really basic 5/10
punches:nothing really alot of describing how your better then him and not enough of making fun of him 4/10
overall:15/30 you got alot of improving to do but keep trying
breakdown for 2bad:
flow:alright some good internal rhyming to tighten it up 7/10
volcab:basic try uppin this next week 5/10
punches:not much the was really direct your opener probably the best,"I'd rather wipe my ass with broken glass// or choke on gas//than lose 2 you// 2 be true im in a different class//" better then your oppenent though 6/10
overall:18/30 good job
vote--2bar wins this in my eyes just on a whole other level then that of the_crazy_one keep posting though and you two can both improve
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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