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Old 04-26-04, 03:47 PM   #2
Identity2k
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yo this was a bad ass verse overall. nice wordplay, tite flow, nice vocab woulda liked more metas but outta 10 i give u a 9.

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I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM
BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame//
into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''

why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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