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Old 04-26-04, 04:52 PM   #3
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A'ight...wasn't tha greatest battle...

QuickP...your structure is fucked...but luckily I don't vote for battles on structure. I thought your punches hit where it hurts...you kept it fresh during everyline, other than dykes and shit...homosexual jokes are played...don't use 'em...overall, a'ight verse, could use some werk, biggest downfall was the structure and flow...

7/10

Inisidious...not a great verse...punches were played...personals were weak...the biggest accomplsihment in your verse was your flow and structure, but that still wasn't the best...overall...werk on ya shit...

4/10

Vote- Quickpunch

No hate...hit this up honestly...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120132
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