ayo chek it dis nigga talk shit bout otha ppl and he from chi town//
iam from queenz nigga i dare u to say dat shit round my town//

^Weak Opener First Off!!! - - - Could Improve!!!! - - -

and ya bull shit rhymes are makin me sleepy//
and this aint a horor film dawg get cha face outa herre cuz its to creepy//

^Where's The Punch?? Playa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2/10

and luike master P said iam bout it bout it...reppin da queenz//
ma slogan is " killa any beefin nigga by all meenz"//

^Weak Closer Aswell - - - Evelate Kiid' .. Mad 'Master P' is Shiaaaaaaaaat' ... Holla!! lol


Aight Check

LostChild'sLines:

See im pist so im about to murder this bitch
You beatin me is impossible like a deathrow hit

^Alright Weak Opener' But Above' ..Da Joka'z..!!

You betta quit, cause when I spit, niggas be loving my shit
Take yo chic, real quick, cause ho's be lovin my dick

^Nice Use Of Multies' Aight Punch!!! 8/10

Better competition in a game of poker, retire like HOVA
Specially when I'm battlin bitches like this nigga DA JOKAH

^An Alright Closer' ...!!!

Dropping Decent Bars - - - With Decent Punches - - - OverAll' ..!! Nice Drop!!


Vote: LostChild

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