JPOLL-won,punches were personal and direct...connected...ur vocab was good..ur flow was a lil off try 2 keep it all 2gether...

shady-man i can tell eminem ispired u,but i doubt he'd hire u,prolly fire u b4 he rejects u ..lol u are ok u just need to keep elevating,ur shit was basic..only good thing was ur structure and flow...kept it 2gether which i like