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shady you need to elvate a lil bit still your structure is better this time but punchs and personals still lack alot of work cause momma shit is played since 1996 if u use that dont exspect to get a win and sayin you the next pac? lmaoooooooooooooo dont do that either

jpoll nice verse decent punchs and personals some good wordplay but you should work on punchs unless you just didnt try after readin his verse i dont know and try and use more personals to the ones you did you werent that great

vote j poll

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