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Old 04-26-04, 05:43 PM   #22
SuBZer0
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Yo this was a good a good battle but I was feelin insidious verse more. Quick
ur verse was good but I think u coulda came harder. The endin didnt really close the deal for me u coulda up it a bunch. Insidious had me rollin with this shit-

by the end of this rhyme i'll have u spinnin in ya chair,
screamin to ya mommy "NO NO NO! INSIDIOUS DOESN'T PLAY FAIR!",
my line's hit u like they were concrete, everythings solid in my spit,
after u read this and 'digest it' it'll leave u shittin bricks

The endin was not that good but Overall I think u got this

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