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Old 04-26-04, 10:39 PM   #11
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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Juss like ^^^ Discharge took it by far he killed u spikyy yet SPIKY u HAD NOT ENOUGH RHYMEInG WORDS BAD structure


Dischage u did good best lines: feel sorry for u u had good intentions, youll never reep the benifets of rap perfection//
you have "homo-connnection",when you see usher you start to get an errection//
should lay ya battles out for ya weak ass teams inspection,so your crew can give it a good correction

that was nice

DIscharge:
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 5/10 Stick to the oher 1 u had before

20/30

SPiky2k8:

Flow2/10
Rhymes 1/10 i have to say u lacked VERY bad on this wun
Structure 4/10


7/30 u LACKED FLOW RHYMES STRUCTURE

Discharge U LACKED STRUCTURE


well u did very well discharge u got him good

SPiky ull get better he GOT U BAD
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