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Old 04-27-04, 01:40 AM   #17
Afterword
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yo this was a phat battle, hard to tell who wanted it more
so ima break it down to the nitty-grity
flow(rhymes)- ecko by far, had madd ryhmes per line and some dope internal and slant ryhmes gud shyt
vocab/wordplay- the vocab wasnt too advanced, but again i like ecko mainly for the word ussage and creativity
punchlines- yo i can c this is khilla bwoys point of emphasis and he has the advantage here with some koo punches.
overall- i think ecko came out swingin and hit hard with an onslaught of furoshis jabs. he had a bunch of consistant lines, and relentless flow that was easy too follow and i could damn near hear him goin off. great imagery and hott battle

fav stanza: "imma put this nigga on the shelf n take his belt
torture rise em make em scream for help i come real stealth
got my shotti and my ammo belt my lyrics felt
talk shit ur dead already thats how your cards were dealt"

vote= ecko
yo i just call it how i c it
hit my battles please yall, this shyt is lame without votes

peace
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