The Epitome Of Greatness
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ayo lost child had a crazy verse..your punches were ill..good wordplay strong multies nice structure and flow...u ripped this verse from opener to closer felt almost every bar..u came hard and had a couple good personals...strong verse..
lostchild: 7.5/10
da jokah u didnt really drop a hott verse your first couple bars were ill but then ya style fell off structure wasnt too good..u had a couple ill punches/personals...a little bit of wordplay/multies..overall i think u could have came harder than u did...nothing in your verse was really original or interesting but overall u had a OK verse...
da jokah: 6/10
vote: lostchild..i think u just came harder and took this battle with just the first half of your verse...overall u did better than da jokah and u have room for improvement but you ill...da jokah u should work on your wordplay and multies..it brings out the best in your verse..and also when the bars are the same length it brings more intensity and flow to your verse overall good stuff from both but lostchild took this
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