guyver won. this was yet another sub par battle. man i don't know why i read these. his first few lines were ok, then down hill from there. they didn't really make much sense for the most part. second dude is there hope for you? your bars were way too long. you tried cramming too much information into one punch. it was like you had small little punches here, then you would throw in a random punch there. didn't keep consistent with the ideas you had. made it flow horrid. could have been better i think.

vote: guyver

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