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Old 04-27-04, 02:16 PM   #12
hydroponic_buzz
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Da~1 -
opener - wasn't feelin' that opener, not much worth sayin - 6/10
structure - was a bit jumpy, try an' keep you're bars similar in length - 6/10
best line -
"Know you got everybody on this site trying to give a donation/
U ant got skills rapping u spit and everybody says this hoes playin/" - 7/10
flow - apart from a few black spots it flowed pretty smoothly - 7/10
punches - not really gettin' the digs in, need to hit harder - 5/10

Jay_Dogg -
opener - once again, not the best opener, although if it was structured better, could have had potential 6/10
structure - pretty good structure, rhymed at the right time - 7/10
best line -
"thinkin you a P.I.M.P, bitch you just a mother fukin G.I.M.P/
so bitch you better start to run, realoded and lookin for fun/
gonna hunt you down 1 by 1 startin of with Da~1/" - 8/10
flow - flowed pretty smoothly - 7/10
punches - harder punches than da~1, gettin' a bit more personal - 7/10

vote - Jay_Dogg

yo jay_dogg, that's you're best spit yet, keep elevatin' son
you too da~1, thats the first battle i've seen you in, the potential is their

peace...
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