mic you need to arrange your lines more like pre so that people can understsand what your sayin, but other than that it was tight
pre your punches needed to be harder but i liked the way you had it all arrranged, but im' a have to give this one to mic even though his lines were twisted, i understood it just didnt like the way it was set up,



vote on my battles, the one with the dawgfather i went soft on because he's only 14.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120927
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120936