lilrenegade89 good verse can use some elevation in your structure,other then that you did pretty good.

my fav line:
"im the grim reaper/
I put u in the sleeper/
your so fat im diggin the whole 6 feet deaper/"
it wasnt hott but it was the only line i liked.

young kidd elevate please your structure was fucked and your punches wernt hitting hard at all use your word play alittle but better PM me if you need help with any thing..

one sided battle y'all

V/lilrenegade89