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Old 04-27-04, 05:42 PM   #205
TfLaMeZ
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dont be writin this shit like you the best/
my rhymes can put you and anyone else to rest/
leave you hangin with death tatted on your chest/
i'll choke you until you have no more breath/
have you screamin for help until there's nothin left//
You gotta understand that your structure is shot/
put your rapping goals aside, give up, just stop/
you're better off with jazz and rock, not hip-hop/
cuz sooner or later, you're dreams'll be cancelled-pull a flip flop//
i hope you take my well thought out advice/
i hope that before you type again, you think twice/
about the shit your gonna get, that'll ruin yoru life//
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