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Old 04-27-04, 07:31 PM   #18
JPoll
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look at dis quickpunch kid beggin for fame//
he tryin to get his hustle on,he tryin to expose his name//
3/10 wtf is that

but he cant cuz all his punches always comin out lame//
sit back relax and watch me murda dis cat in his own game//
5/10 decent

cuz im a nonstop superial, individual, physical, type of criminal,//
mentally like the chemical//
3/10 not good flow...and shit

kid you need a miracle to reach my level//
ima keep the lyrical flow it aint gon never be settled//
4/10 wtf...

quickpunch call the cops when you see me dawg//
cuz dis shit wont stop til you see me fall//
1/10 that's terrible...come on now


v- quickpunch...cause his first line would have more point then this