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yo this shit was tite. it was nice all around and nice multis and vocab. but the structure of ur verse doesnt look like a verse juss fix up the struc. and it'll be tite.
holla back at mine
I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM
BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''
why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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