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Old 04-27-04, 08:30 PM   #36
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alright... hitten this up.

so i battle L.I. the first time, shit, with my verse i had him...
tell he realized the rules, and goes and bitches to the admins...
-plain personal.

obviously records dont mean shit, he cant even get into my crew...
ive heard of battlin less talent to boost ur record, but why newbs?...
-alright lines

L.I.?? that shit stands for Lyrically Incapable...
on some site tryna find a rhyme, while my shit is inescapable...
-an alright attempt at using name for a personal,2nd line was half a punch half a filler

and nigga we may be the same age, but im years ahead'a u...
why do u think class sic picked me instead'a u...
-first was a filler, 2nd was a good line

u posted a half ass verse against me and got lucky...
i got DQ'ed before a vote could tell u how much u suck b...
-filler, nice 2nd line

ur terrible, shit, half the vets dont even know L.I....
u make no difference on this site bitch, u may ass well die...
-first line was true for a while , shitty 2nd line

no one wants u in their crew, and no one wanted to be in the one u made...
u were with UE for like a week, and had ur own for maybe two days...
-YAY, a somewhat good personal [b]

An alright verse all in all, you had good personals, and somewhat good punches. Onto LI


Shit why u complain bout round one, either way u woulda got the 'L'etter...
In our first battle my verse next to urs was like Toy story,'lightyears' better....
-[b]first line ehhh, 2nd line was alright


Hatin on me, sayin im wack, but cant let me go...u need me like a vitamin...
This two sided bitch goin from crackin on my rhymes to sayin Let him in!!...
-first line...wack. 2nd line was a good personal, kuniva was first to say let LI in

Dissin an emcee thats bout to be accepted in your crew...
Then in just week, on their roster, ill be placed ahead of you...
-filler first, Nice 2nd line, cause its true HAH

Think he hot shit but he dont pursue true emcees...
Seems to me that all he wants to battle are newbies...
-saw a punch from both of you like this, and both werent too goood

Just had to challenge me to get pay back and be reimbursed...
We battled last month, all that time u could only come up wit that verse?!?!...
-ehhh

Biggest freeposter alive thats why your post count towers...
Look how much he already posted and its only been open an hour!!...
-LOL... I LOVE IT, Its so fucking true...

Lost the first battle, and now this one is ur second chance...
Just like 'colorado', your record's gonna have an 'avalanche'...
-hmm played weak punch

So i hope i finished your ass off and dont challenge me again...
Instead off backstabbin me, decide if im a foe or friend...
-a good ender, i think he should afte this battle


Was a nice battle, both had a good amount of personal punches, which i love. And i judge on punches mostly, so this goes to LI. His personal punches were harder hitting. They were well explained in a short amount of words. You both had some mediocre shit, but the personals you had were pretty nice. I think if kuniva came with a harder name punch it would have been his, but LI took it with the free posting punch. Really nice battle.

V/LI.
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