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Old 04-27-04, 08:45 PM   #28
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marvolous
the ending got worse, but very good wordplay, but the timberland one was sorta stupid. very good use of multies and punches hit hard.
punches,

shadow da tool-pop-often....so close ya mouth dude-stop-talkin-
be4 ya shirt look like u bought it from a "tupac auction"-[alot of holes]

marv's a vet,my record fukked up cuzz my sick punches is hard da catch-
shadow u garbage if i was da "Feed" off ya verse i would "starv" da death-



shadows edge had good multies and good flow, and his vocab was better than marvolous
punches

All of Saddam’s oil couldn’t make your rhymes slick.
Your crew bout to be blessed as I leave it Marv-less…

but marvolous had better wordplay more complex punches hit harder and tehre were lesser fillers. peace no hate
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