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Old 04-27-04, 09:08 PM   #8
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CLOSE CLOSE BATTLE breakdown forlyrical method
overall 16/30
yuor structure was a lil bit wack and mde ya shyt harder to cohmprehend
bestline:You to pickly,my rhymes real sticky, u from Canada most of yall niggas is stricky dickly
breakdown for mike12:
overall 18/30
your structere ws nice with nice punches
your best line:LM thinks he the shit, but It’s sad this “cat” is being chased by a “mouse”//
Your asshole must cemented the way you be “dropping shit” from ya mouth//2
thtn shyt was nice good job both elevate and stay pimpin
v/mike12
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