ok check it
method your structur is bad really and that opener is played sars been used like 300 times and the closer weasnt that good either soft punch and self boastin not to good and there was a few solid punchs threw the verse a decen drop just work on opening anns closin battles better and try to be a creative
mike nice structure opener was tight nice wordplay in it closer wasnt to great wasnt really fealin it had some goodpunchs and personals threw the verse pretty good drop had goor wordplay throught the verse and pretty creative just work on staying conisitant with all your lines
vote mike
hit this up since i just voted on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121104
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