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Old 04-27-04, 09:58 PM   #15
Afterword
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man that was a garbage battle
the first cat seemed like he was jokin, b/c that piece of shyt verse has no business on this board. and u shouldnt use the word nigger in that context n e more u lame.

ne way this goes to mixx, cuz at least he had some content, and attempted some punchlines
gud effort mixx and u win but elevate yur rhymes homie and try to use some depth
get creative: play on words, multies, personals, similies, metas and all that gud shyt

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