Alright White Powder not only did you rip this other kid, but you've defintely elivated your shit, since I last read ya verses.

You whipped this cat in everysingle which way
opener, closer, punches, and flow, just keep elivate'n

Spikey, dont' mispell words, and your punches should rhyme more inmportantly they should make sense read some other battles for a start.