I agree..this sounded to me like earlier Eminem also. I like your style..like you how you easily and smoothly switch from one subject to another. Its very interesting, and shows you have skills as a lyricist.

The flow was directly on point, kind of a laid back type flow..reminded me of a Snoop type shit or Mos Def maybe.

There were some lines that were particularly dope:

"Tighter than Fort Knox security"
^^That was creative/Funny

The only thing I didn't like was parts of it didn't quite seem to rhyme right. I don't know, maybe you are British or just have an accent different from mine, so if that is the case, don't take offense.

The rest of it I liked.

Keep it up, homie.

Peace

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