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Old 04-27-04, 11:12 PM   #4
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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Young H u NEED TO ELAVATE WAYYYYYY Higher man ur not at da TOP OF Ur level u Need MUCH better Flow Rhymes And Structure well for a N00B ur AVRAGE but u NEED to ELAVTE Dogg ur Rap 6.3/10

Discharge u Did Way Better then YOUNG H its like Young h it was a First time steppin in to the dome of BATTLEiNg ur structure is a LIL weak but For everything else u did Exelent 8.5/10 i say


Young H

Open 5/10
Close 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 5/10
Structure 2/10

24/50

Discharge

Open 8/10
Close 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Punches 9/10
Structure 7/10

41/50

Good WORK Guys but DISCHARGE Pull THe WIN

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skillz-is-what you lack,your weak like peter-pan against shaq//
as-a-matter-of-fact you should be a proffeser at the institute of rap wack//
see as u kno u lost this match,my ryhmes are just straight up cash//
nextime just relax,dotn come to rapbattles with your fucking trash//


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