whoa...what's up wit find mind? anyway...deleon most definetely had this one, no question, swamp, u didn't come hard at all bro, u should try to play to the crowd. like "look at this mofo blah blah blah", instead of "now deleon on my bad side you listed/
i got killah rhymes to let you know im sick and twisted/", practice punches, otherwise tho, ur shit DID flow and the structure was fine.

my faves-"I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow--
I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow--" <---hot
and
"fuck your dumb shit, i dont like how these soft rooks is actin--
talkin back to they daddy, if they moms wasnt at the party they'd just be jizz stains on a napkin--" hotter, lol

vote-deleon

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