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Old 04-28-04, 05:36 AM   #43
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Breakdown:

$$upreme

My Ryhmes Are Like Good Sex, But My Lyrics Will Unfortunatly Make Ur Backbone Curl*
We All Know U A Nasty Pervert, J-poll Got More "seamen" Fondlin Animals Then Seaworld*

-=so so opener. I've seen better by u double dollar=- 4/10

J-poll Is Like Injured Reserve The Game Doesn’t Really Need You*
I’ll Go In Your Cerebellum Cut Off Your Oxygen Supply And Lyrically Brain Feed You*

-=Finish started good, coulda bin better. This is one of ur poorer verses man=- 5/10
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JPoll

yo
Supreme you got 9 losses, an still you call urself a vet?
Ur leader hates ur crew he's joining a new, I guess ur the "classic reject"

-=Shits funny man. I seen better, but thats good=- 6/10

Yur major malfunction, he's an unoriginal bitch,his song prolly bout cash n cars
My two cents- ELEVATE, i mean it was 3 years ago that people put "*" after bars!!!

-=thats good, I like the punch, one of ur better ones=- 7/10

Overall, double dollar had a few too many blind one ups and not enough punches. Structure was good in both an so was the flow. JPolls was easier to get through, those 1ups made me cringe.

Vote// JPoll
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