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Old 04-28-04, 09:50 AM   #16
Rising Sun
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your verse was pretty weak man....very basic structure and rhymes. no wordplay or not very good multies. you vocab was not too great, and the only thing decent was your flow. not hating, been elevating....peace
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cause me without rhymes is like hot dogs without tha buns
ill beat yo ass mo times than sammy sosa got home runs

this is not a competition no hate but rich you waisted your lines. that drop was sick enough to beat flyweights....shit...just these lines will speak for its self.....tight verse man....
this was such a sick line....

im smokin ya azz like some indoe..aint my fault ya momz lean low like the limbo, i can tell she a hoe when she spreads her legs wider than a Michael Jordan symbol//

ya keepz it intact.. take a lesson u need to get capped, ever since u saw 8mile u think u can rap, u can't rap don't u see its a trap fuck wit the wrong nigga N in up wit 3 gunz to ya back//
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