flow intelligent
your multies were good, not much personals, and u need more vocab and u need to work on the flow. good use of punches....
that has everyone droolin like fat people in lunchlines//
stoppin me was never in guyvers prophecy//
probably masturbatin in privacy while he watches me//
amazing wordplay and punch here
your style is like a mixture of "mettalica" and "peter pan"//
you try to "rock hard" but your punches will "never-land"//

more personals and vocab but your flow was not too great and u lack harder punches cause some stuff dont make sense. you not bad though....peace....
nice punch
Gay jokes are like ya verses, they lame an usually retarded like u got downs syndrome/
At the end of this shit you be on the street while I be ridin past you with 20" chrome/