breack down...CounTREE Jay...great opener set da tone for a good verse..punches can hard...flow was there but try to keep 12-16 sylbols per line to get it realy flowin'....vocab was a srtong point and wordplay was nice...personals also came hard...overall...7/10..nice drop focus on flow a bit...

Lost child....opener was week...ur flow was prety wack seein' as ervey line had a change in slyabols..vocab was also wack...use longer word...personals were lackin' punch..overall5/10..not bad..focus on vocab makin'words londer....not bad...

v/CounTREE Jay simpley coz his overall game was more perfected...pz out

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