Thread: The Tragic
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Old 04-28-04, 12:41 PM   #3
Identity2k
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From: 3*0*5
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yo this shit was ill but had a choppy flow. Some of the rhymes in the beginning were weak but it got better. The hook was a little simple also but other than that the shit was tite

holla back at mine
I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM
BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame//
into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''

why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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