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Old 04-28-04, 01:34 PM   #14
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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Real Througoh ya shit was Crazy a Lil bit Streched but u dat shit off da FLow Structure punches n rhyme wuz all good FAV line:you definetly a "blind-poet" cuz u have "no vision in your writtens" & your rhymes show-it!
Ya'll wacks can learn alot from this dummy's-acts
The only time this cat "went down in history" was "suckin off his teacher in social studies-class"!


DAt Shit WAS ILL SON!!


As for u uhh Puertoricannelly ya shitz WACK ((**~~!NO DESRESPECT!~~**)) ur lines where STRECHED u dint get that shit off i dont have a FAV lin from u but ull get better ull elavate in 5-7 years


REAL

open 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 9/10
Flow 8/10
PUNCHES 10/10
44/50

Puerto

Open 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Flow 7/10
PUNCHES 3/10
26/50

VOTE:REAL
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