ok heres my breakdown: young_H you did sweet for your first battle,but fix ya structure
overall: 19/30
betline:/no make that a life insurance policy/cuz F.L.G. like the naitzes we droppin bodies/
that was tight

ok

discharge u beat hiss ass but your not as new man step up and battle somebody good pick on some1 yor own size like me!!

breakdown:24/30 solid verse but bad structure

best line:skillz-is-what you lack,your weak like peter-pan against shaq//
as-a-matter-of-fact you should be a proffeser at the institute of rap wack//
see as u kno u lost this match,my ryhmes are just straight up cash//
nextime just relax,dotn come to rapbattles with your fucking trash//
if u dont like what im sayin bout you then battle me