honsetly battle wasnt that gr8.......not ta mention the stupid ass bitch fight u were having....
aight...goes like this....
Afterwood- had a nice flow, structure was impressive, and kept to basics with the personals and punches which werked well....maybe ya complexity needing up fo real when the verse started to loose a lil emphasis.....good solid drop though....keep it up
7/10
Jpoll-Its aight dawg.....ya had sum good hard multies in there, but really honsetly ya punches wernt really hitting hard, everything else was good flow the lot legit.......try not to use the same wrding in each of the lines....
5.5/10
vote afterwood......dont be bitching gainst me...honest shit!!! dont like it lump it
return the favour!!!.....drop a vote on either of these links
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120747
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120603