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afterword opener wasnt that good to me this first line was corny and the punch was decent the closer was pretty good wordplay nice punch rest of the verse had good flow and multies but the punchs and personals just werent that good to me just try workin on makin your punchs and personals better

jpoll opener was pretty nice good personals and decent punch closer was soft tried on the personals an punchs just didnt connect with me and threw the rest of the verse had good mulites as well wordplay wasnt that great but you had better punchs and personals threw the verse to me billy that hid and gary coleman is what got you the vote

not a very good battle to me

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