Ok,
Bm, Very basic flow. Structure was choppy. Punches, a few decent ones, mostly shitty and basic though. Personals- non-existant.Multis- nah Creativity- nah

Fav Bar:

None really, but this was the best one I guess.
Get a fire extingusiher cause i'm spitting fire//
I'll rip this bitch like he walking through a feild of barbed wire//

Ill
Structure- I really liked that shit, flowed pretty good, a lil' hard to stay wit in a few spots, but overall, pretty solid. Punches- Funny, hard enuff, definately. Personals- good, and you had some, so that's always a plus. Multis- Decent Creativity- Hell yeah, I enjoyed your verse, and had my hand coverin' my mouth cause I felt badd for homeboy gettin' sonned so badd.

Fav line: So many to choose from

Where do i start?? Everything about you says 'im a herb'
Wackness is undefined
An ya scripts always amaze.. like blank pads with a blurb
Cos kid's got nothin to say.. an no one to say it to
Mumbles in mime

I really liked those, although I actually thought the whole verse was solid.
Very one-sided. Bm, just elevate man, No hard feelinz. Ill- nice spit man.

Vote-Ill

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