[GOOD STUFF]

The subject was deep, and probably hard to write about. I enjoy reading something other than 'I'm the best rapper', so this was nice.

The hook was pretty tight..simplistic, yet put the message across.

[BAD STUFF]

The flow was choppy almost though the whole thing.
It would have been better if you had used some multis.
It didn't really put a great picture in my head. But only practise can help that.

Overall..it was an aiight drop..keep it up, homie.

And if you have the time please leave feed on this drop:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121135

Peace

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