..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP:
good battle i liked both verses
gotaa -u had some ite shit but u cant use da same word twice at da end it blow yo whole verse
bestline-erbody kno this bum dont wanna see the kid/
but he needed publicity for that piece of shit link in his sig/
dat was hott
worsteline-my clique is evil kanivel, the way we jump yall niggas/
ya clique is fuckin garbage so im gon dump yall nigga/
^^ bad way 2 start
overall verse get a **8**
discharge
u had a nice flow and some nice punches
bestline-your last battle was your"15-minutes-of-fame",give it up youve already been "slain"//
nothing could help ya"game", "i got my ass beat" to that you should change ya name//
^^^ nice start
worsteline-none
overall yo vere get a **9**
winner-discharge
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