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Old 04-28-04, 08:24 PM   #38
Shadows edge
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u da type da back down & freeze,keep talkin da black pound a squeeze-
u not tuff u a "happy" nigga datz scared of "beef" like da "mad cow disease"-
not crazy original, but decent
all u do is hate on my shyne,but wait till da dem strays start brakin ya spine-
dunn battlin u is like "puttin a watch on my hip" all u doin is "wastin my time"-
but da 8 or 9, a put ya "brain in da air" so u could "make up ya mind"-
not a fan of 3 line bars, i tried it once and it didnt work. i like the wasting time wordplay, but its kinda wasted in between two useless lines.
u'z a lil bitch nigga u really aint worth da clipp tho-
he like da "fuck animals" y u think deadly vision is on top of a "purple hippo"-
.. not too creative.. ok personal i suppose
dont believe a bar dat come off dis homo's breath,he dont hold no tecs-
he couldn't get signed if "jermaine dupri" was really "so-so-deaf"-[def]
the rhyme is a bit weak.. the line is ok.
u fukkin garbage and im da sickest herb respect it-
deadlyvision:yo marv if i dont have "sex" and "rap" will i get signed da "virgin records"
kinda funny.. not a great punch though


Queens??You Remind Me Of The Sound When Pimps Slap Hoes, Whack/
Cause This Bitch Couldn't Spit Ill If He Was Eminem Black/
meh... seems like a forced rhyme, not feeling this opener
You ryde Dick, You Just Love To Kiss Glass Cause Like Jordan Your Raps Aren't In Tact/
Sickest?? Another Fag Ama verbally rape ya Betta Believe thats a FAct/
blah...
I Hope This Pussy Dont Come ''Weak''(Week) I Didn't Know The ''Date'', Your weak Verse Is Like The French Rovultion And Your IN the Third-Estate/
ok this line is long enough to be a bar, so no multi. the punch is original, but not that hard hitting.
I Spit Like Vajita And Gohan When They Conjuctuate, And You Still a Pussy Like A Sycic Cause Your ''Already Know Your Fate''/
bah... a dbz line.. you're lucky i know who they are..

--Switch--

I'm speakin' the truth, this cross dresser's in need of rebuke,C'mon Most of ya shirts don't have a back...and soon neither will you/
why did you switch here, and not two lines ago? this a nice punch though.
I bet you're a virgin too, for sex ya pray & cry for it often
Today's a lucky day, you'll get laid...inside of a coffin/
nice, nice.
You a Royal?? In regards ta that, you're a buddin' new star
Just like Mekhi Pfifer...cuz you'll be a thug in ER/
nice, nice
I'll beat you within an 'inch' of ya life, where ya couldn't be saved,So many weaknesses in times I'll leave you with a foot in the grave/
not as nice, but keeping the momentum

ok, basically, marv had a more consistent verse, but nothing was standout. deadly everything before the --switch-- was really just substandard, was barely feeling it. however, after that you really turned up the heat and came hard hitting. don't do the first style ever again. tight battle.. very tight.. but i give it to deadly for ending with momentum, whereas marv's verse got weaker towards the end i think.
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