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Old 04-28-04, 08:26 PM   #7
PoLiFicK
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dis was a good battle

buzz only reason i didnt like yo verse u have 2 shorten yo linezz it can be better than dat u had some tite shit juss yo verse was long


puertoricanelly your verse was tite ish i liked yo flow and yo punches
nice structure also

bestline-i spit actual facts on actual tracks you failin and fallin through lyrical cracks,tryna learn from the masta but you cant so take ya claws off ma back

worste line-none

buzz-

bestline-hydroponic finds these flows while smokin' demonic chronic/
gin an' tonic power the punches an' keep them harmonic/

worsteline-

you betta' pack yo' trunk up nelly and head yo' ass down to the circus/
i betcha yo' gangsta friends love gettin' head when you suck on their boz cuz/


overall

punches-puertoricanelly
flow-puertoricanelly
structure-puertoricanelly
personals-buzz
vocab-puertoricanelly
winner-puertoricanelly
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