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black opener was pretty tight nice wordplay and good personal closer was garbage wasnt nothin there set up line was nothin and punch was nothin had good punchs and personlas threw out the verse though overall good verse should try workin on wordplay,evenin out all your lines and multies but still a nice verse
best lines
Im bout to kill this cat in this fuckin battle
have u on tha "edge" of fuckin bein scared of ya own "shadow"(shadows-edge)

shadow opener was kinda weak to me set up line was there but the punch didnt connect closer was tight liked that had good mulites personals and a good punch nice shit and some good punchs and wordplay threw the verse overall good verse liked some of that shit just work on bein consistent and more personals
best lines
Cat got two quarters to his name and think he 50 Cent
Quit chasing fame... spit one bar n your talent spent
and the closer was ill

vote shadows edge not by much good battle

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