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Old 04-28-04, 11:37 PM   #3
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STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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Originally Posted by DEsTIn2dEsTroY
Stop sayin that you R born2spit, when all you keep spitting is boering ass shit//
Fake ass lunatic that be biteing your hole style off some other emcee skit//
not speaking biological terms- but in rhymes , U~R~NOT~SIC//
More like simplistic homosexual , illiterately imatateing an emcee intellectual //
Reality proves that you resemble to be more feminem sweet candy ass like m&m’s//
Simulateing a toy created by Tonka, with a look straight from street fighter ugly like blanka//
Attack with extreme intensities to deflect your armor to endure to harm yah//
Blow your how style up like the uni-bomber leave you mentally demented like Jeffery Dommer //
Your full of hate I devistate any weak emcee that’s hella fake//
You’re a half baked cake~ that just got eat//


^^^^umm alrite verse dunn....u had a ill flow and a lil wordplay but ya punchlines wasn't there dunn..nahmean ya opener was cool but i aint really like da way ti ryhmed but overal i give a 6/10
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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT