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Old 04-29-04, 12:36 AM   #5
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From: fo' shizzle in tha dirty but reppin LB New J
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i dont know about that song, the verses are tight but it doesnt fit wit the hook, maybe u should try writin the verses n then the hook, thats just some advice from 1 lyricist 2 another give feedback on strictly the truth no twist n turns
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