Alright, both yall came correct, nice.
Ya both had good punches, but I think Whisky had a few more that hit harder.
"I know you're slow, so I'll spit slacker 'till you get it.
How do you expect to win when you're shit's incoherent?"
As far as openers go, I'd say whisky had that too.
"Your insipid cliches are destined for weak review.
All bets are in, kid, the odds are stacked against you."
Like I said this was a close battle and I would expect it to be a close one.
Loneone
I'm fundamentally the future of this site inevitably/So I will rip you from HEAD to SHREDS because you accepted this test from me//
-this was kinda a weak opener,
Incredibly lone stands for leapin' on niggas effortlessly/
You stressin....see the future outcome has you losin' quite terribly//
-again here is another part where you could be thrown punches but you use this to talk yourself up, not a bad tecnique but when you do that you gotta go big or go home
I got the multi's out the way now...HOE WHAT'S UP????/You're like a verbal prostitute bitch...you blow and suck//
-nice punch
I'll fold you fuck...by using punchlines so I'll murder you quicker/You couldn't spit a sweet bar if youre weak ass choked on a Snickers//
-better punch
You'll cry and you'll bicker...but face it bitch...your flow is basic/You couldn't even beat me if there was a glitch in the matrix//
-okay punch
My dicks here yo taste it...cause it seems that your'e a fan of this black cock/And don't be mad...you're just another disgrace to RapBlock//
weak finsiher,
but alround not a bad battle.
Hit my shit, and return da fav
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120663
P.S I had no idea he was a such a herb when I battled him (i think its his first battle)